Antigone Cadmus

As promised! Eek- it's so long! I'll go back where I left off. Then he asked me to try to control the fire and I could. My training went half ...

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Hi, Overlord! Welcome to YWS! It's a great place to get your writing critiqued, but you should critique other's writing as well! When you post a piece of your own ...

Hi, lordgluman! I'm not Finnish, but your poem is still pretty good. Onto the review: Check your meter. It's a bit off at times if not non-existent. glorious Swedish and ...

I started a day or two ago with 60 reviews... oh no... I've only done twenty. :(

Hey! I like the wold! His really cute. It reminded me of Kakashi's nin-dogs as well... The only critique I have: -The flames are too level. It's fire! Make it ...

Yay! *cheers* A Zelda game fan! You can has a cookie! Anyway, onto the review! You did this with a mouse? That's really amazing. Seriously. It looks exactly like Link. ...

I've only used photoshop a few times. You are really good! First graphic: I love, love, love those flowers! They are so pretty! I wish you had made it smaller ...

These are nice pictures. First photograph: The contrast and the background are a bit distracting. Second photograph: Ah. Contrast is much better. ^_^ The only thing here is a bit ...

Ooooh! I like this a lot, writ3rindisguis3 First photograph: I like the angle a lot. The contrast of the trees and the sky is nice. Second photograph: It's nothing really ...

Wow! This was really good. I haven't read your poetry, but this is an excellent piece of writing Home page I think you need to capitalize page as well. disection-picking-up-poo-and-looking-at-genitals

This is pretty good. I don't really know poetry very well, though :). It's better than I could do. And the star that at me gaze Maybe it's just me, ...

Kitty was having fun being blue-colored. That's what she said in chat. ^_^

I cannot even begin to edit this! There is too much! Let me give you some hints: -use punctuation -always capitalize I -break up sentences -capitalize the beginning of sentences ...